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Re: tribute cd title

To: "J.Marie Hall" <j_marie_hall at hotmail_com>
Subject: Re: tribute cd title
From: Dave Cousineau <davec at pads_com>
Date: Fri, 11 Jun 1999 12:35:24 -0400
CC: over-the-rhine at actwin_com
References: <19990611162545.50448.qmail at hotmail_com>

"J.Marie Hall" wrote:
> 
> Dave says:
> 
> >I agree here. But I don't like the shortened version (_Improvised By
> >Toddlers_). It doesn't sound like a title to anything. Isn't it one of
> >those grammar things, like a dangling clause participle modifier?
> >Anyway, I don't think having the word "Jazz" in there gets in the way. I
> >like it.
> 
> Considering that "My Love is a Fever" shifts most words' grammatical homes
> and comfort zones, I think we could take poetic lisence and do it.  I too
> think the "jazz licks" implies something all too specific.  We could just
> shift the "subness" (not a word, I'm sure) of the tribute acknowledgement
> and call it something like: "Over the Rhine Improvised by Toddlers."
> 

("Over the Rhine Improvised by Toddlers)" Now THAT I like...

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