Re: speaking of bad poetry

[Aaron Edwards <edwardsaaron2000 at yahoo_com>]

Ok, My turn
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Near sighted  vision
 blurs your beauty
and who's  that with you?
Is that your sister, 
     -or your brother?
Or is he  your love?
I squint to see if he holds your hand,
and to see if you are as beautiful
as I think you are.

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8 years back

Sweet grunge pounds my ears
I look back to 
a confused boy of 19
No job, no money,
just a head full of wants
'I want a wife, I want a car'
' I want a college education'

I have a job (for now), though I rarely have any money
I still want a wife. And I desperately need a car.
I almost have my college education,
but many things remain the same
for this confused man of 27
as sweet grunge pounds my ears.

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Speaking of poetry, it's 11:30 PM, and I have a paper
for my Prose poetry class to write on French
Symolists. That Rimbaud is quite the young snot. :-)

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 And I use these words pretty loosely. There's so much more to life than words. 
-Linford Detweiler
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Aaron J Edwards
edwardsaaron2000 at yahoo_com
http://clone316.tripod.com

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