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RE: diversion on a cloudy day



I'll weigh in as a "think it's decent" one.  Never throw things
away.  That's why I write my rough drafts in a journal,
generally.
:)
Bethany

>
> if you think this is decent, i guess that means to
> never throw anything away; if you think it sucks,
> blame rhys - i feel sure i appropriated one of her
> back beats somewhere in that last piece of verse she
> posted a couple weeks ago...  :)
>
>
> Residual Walk
>
> drowsy blue purples fell
> from her trembled eyelash
> slit dreamily tearless
> and curled with insistence
> illuminated
> by lightening instants
> the rumination
> of her curious gait
> after a hidden hand
> had softly snapped
> a clutched twig
>
> ewg
> 1994, 2003
>
>

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