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Re: Haiku submission



On Fri, 22 Dec 2000 09:22:03 -0500, you wrote:

>
>
>From: Andrew Vogel
>
> 1         1         1    1      1   = 5
>Bruce makes me very mad.
>
>1         1     1   1  1      1      1  = 7
>He's glad, but I know he's very
>
>  1       1       1      2 = 5
>very, very, very ugly.
>
>Ummm... 5 - 7 - 5.
>
>Maybe it's time for
>David to cover his bald
>head. Cold seeps in there.
>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>
>That was a good laugh!
>I was counting syllables.
>Not the words themselves.
>
>Andrew my good friend.
>Do yourself a favour, mate.
>Forget the Haiku's.
>
>Stick to what you know.
>And what is that you might ask?
>Just being, "The Drew".
>
>So there you go, bud.
>I couldn't keep it shorter.
>My "snappy" response.
>
>At this time of year,
>Blessings to ALL Rhinelander's.
>And fucking new year!
>
Ummm...

Genius, my count is
OF the syllables, not words.
Learn the rules, boyo.

I did blow it on
one other haiku, with Bruce
as subject of it.

Extra word, a little 'a'
snuck past my careful re-read
and into the net.

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